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The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The chart illustrates the percentage of total visitors, visiting 4 separate spots in Britain in 1999. It also gives details about the number of tourists going to various places in theme parks. Overall, maximum people are visiting theme parks. Blackpool Pleasure Beach is the most visited them park. Chessington World of Adventure and Legoland, Windor are the least visited theme parks. Wildlife Parks and Zoos are the least visited places among all places. 38% of total visitors prefered theme parks. Almost equal percentage (37%) of people went to museums and galleries. Less than half of what visits museums likes to visit historic houses and monuments. Only 9% planned their trips to wildlife parks and zoos. Even in them parks, people have various options. Blackpool Pleasure Beach have the highest turn out of people with 47%. Alton Towers and Pleasureland Southport expects almost equal share of visitors, 17% and 16% respectively. Only 10% of customers of theme park likes to visit Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland, Windsor.
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are visiting
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theme
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parks
. Blackpool Pleasure Beach is the most visited them
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park
.
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Chessington
World of Adventure and
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Legoland
,
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are the least visited
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parks
. Wildlife
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and Zoos are the least visited places among all places.

38% of total visitors
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. Almost equal percentage (37%) of
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went to museums and galleries. Less than half of what visits museums likes to visit historic
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houses
and monuments.
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Only
9% planned their trips to wildlife
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parks
and zoos.

Even in them
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parks
,
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people
have various options. Blackpool Pleasure Beach
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the highest turn out of
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with 47%. Alton Towers and
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Pleasureland
Southport
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almost equal share of visitors, 17% and 16%
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park
likes to visit
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Chessington
World of Adventures and
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, Windsor.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999.

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