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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. 2b5nX
The two maps show the same island first one is before the construction and the second one is after the construction for tourists. Looking at all overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the island changed a lot after the construction. Having a glimpse at the illustrations reveals that the first island was 100 meters and had no facilities for visitors. After the construction beach is used for swimming, whether firstly it had no use. New accommodation has been maintained on the west and east side. Reception is in the centre part of the island. Shifting to the remaining part, the footpath around the reception area has been connected with the pier restaurant and accommodation. Vehicle tracking is starting from the beach and attached with accommodation. Trees are in a similar place as they were on the initial island.
The two maps
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for tourists. Looking at all
overall
perspective, it is
readily
apparent that the
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island
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changed
a lot after the
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construction
. Having a glimpse at the illustrations reveals that the
first
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island
was 100 meters and had no facilities for visitors. After the
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construction
beach is
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used
for swimming, whether
firstly
it had no
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use
. New accommodation has
been maintained
on the west and east side. Reception is in the
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centre
part of the
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island
. Shifting to the remaining part, the footpath around the reception area has
been connected
with the pier restaurant and accommodation. Vehicle tracking is starting from the beach and attached with accommodation. Trees are in a similar place as they were on the initial
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island
.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

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