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Summarize features and recreation facilities before and after on the island

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By looking at two maps, it is an evident that the island dramatically has changed. Plenty of recreation facilities have been constructed on the vacant island in order to develop the island resort with tourism attractions. To preserve natural features on this pristine island, all trees were maintained during the period. As an untouched region, the eastern area of the island has been protected. Sailing boats are the only transport way and 2 platforms were placed into the entrance in the middle of map. Following footpath, leads to the reception which the restaurant as the largest structure on the island is visible behind the reception. Numerous small villas which were built, preserve the originality of the island and this creative accommodation has made a pleasurable atmosphere and eye-catching exterior view in the central and western districts. All areas are connected to each other with footpaths and a vehicle track. Furthermore, there is a  swimming beach for having a perfect relaxation and enjoyment in the westernmost region of the island. Overall, except the eastern part, the island has being developed significantly over the years.
By looking at two maps, it is an evident that the
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dramatically
has
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Plenty
of recreation facilities have
been constructed
on the vacant
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island
in order to develop the
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island
resort with tourism attractions.

To preserve natural features on this pristine
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island
, all trees
were maintained
during the period. As an untouched region, the eastern area of the
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island
has
been protected
. Sailing boats are the
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only
transport way and 2 platforms
were placed
into the entrance in the middle of map. Following footpath, leads to the reception which the restaurant as the largest structure on the
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island
is visible behind the reception. Numerous
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small
villas which
were built
, preserve the originality of the
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island
and this creative accommodation has made a pleasurable atmosphere and eye-catching exterior view in the central and western districts. All areas
are connected
to each other with footpaths and a vehicle
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track
.
Furthermore
, there is a
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swimming beach for having a perfect relaxation and enjoyment in the westernmost region of the island.

Overall
, except the eastern part, the
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island
has
being developed
significantly
over the years.
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IELTS academic Summarize features and recreation facilities before and after on the island

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