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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar chart represents the results of a survey in percentage for people who goes to four types of places of tourist attraction in the Uk in the year 1999. Overall, the bar shows that theme parks, has the highest appeal for people, although Museums and galleries are not far behind from theme parks. The least place that people visit in the Uk is wildlife parks and zoos, which has a significant downward compared to other places. People goes to theme parks mainly for Blackpool pleasure beach, and the percentage of them are 47%, which is extraordinary higher than people who visit Legoland, which had a 10% only. There is not a huge upward between theme parks, and museums & galleries, the difference is only 1% between them. However theme parks has more activities for example it has a Pleasure Land, which had a 16% visitors in 1999 In wildlife parks and zoo are extremely low compared other tourist attraction, that escalate about 9% only from the bar chart that was illustrated in Britain in 1999.
The bar chart represents the results of a survey in percentage for
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goes
to four types of places of tourist attraction in the
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Uk
in the year 1999.

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, the bar
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that
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theme
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parks
, has the highest appeal for
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people
, although Museums and galleries are not far behind from
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theme
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parks
. The least place that
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people
visit in the
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Uk
is wildlife
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parks
and zoos, which has a significant downward compared to other places.

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People
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goes
to
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theme
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parks
mainly
for Blackpool pleasure beach, and the percentage of them are 47%, which is extraordinary higher than
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people
who visit
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Legoland
, which had a 10%
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.

There is not a huge upward between
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theme
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parks
, and museums & galleries, the difference is
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only
1% between them.
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However
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theme
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parks
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has
more activities
for example
it has a Pleasure Land, which had a 16% visitors in 1999

In wildlife
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parks
and zoo are
extremely
low compared other tourist attraction, that escalate about 9%
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only
from the bar chart that
was illustrated
in Britain in 1999.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999.

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176 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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