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The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the Internet everyday from 2003-2006. Summarizes the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the Internet everyday from 2003-2006. Summarizes the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 7xp6

The given column graph illustrates the percentage of adults of different age groups using the Internet between 2003 and 2006 in the UK. The main users of internet were young adults aged between 16 and 24 years. In 2003 and 2004, they shared almost same percentage which was Four-fifths. In 2005, this statistic increased dramatically to 100%. But in 2006, declined slowly to 90%. According to the graph, all the age groups used the internet more. In the 25-44 group, there was a moderate growth from 50% to 80% between 2003 and 2006 respectively. Just like that, there were increases for 45 to 54 years old people, increasing from to 60% to 80% between 2003 and 2006. The other two groups did not differ much. Although the proportions had minor variation. Overall, the trend was upward. People between 16 and 44 showed the greatest usage of Internet. On the other hand, over 65 age groups people didn't use the internet much

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