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The table illustrates some interesting facts about some of the countries film watching activities in millions.

The table illustrates some interesting facts about some of the countries film watching activities in millions. GGW2
The table illustrates some interesting facts about some of the countries film watching activities in millions. It allows comparisons between the number of people who live in different countries and shows how many countries have fans of variety film types. Overall, Indian people spend enough time to watch television as they make huge number of films in every year. initially, it must not have been another lover result from 24. 5 million according to population of India. The lowest result belongs to Japan, whose people watch films about 17. 8 million. As we can predict before a hand, the most popular film type is action, which both youth and elders like watching without a doubt, with the result of nearly 30 million. On the other hand, horror films are rarely watched by all nations having about 16 milllon viewing result.
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from 24. 5 million according to population of India. The lowest
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belongs to Japan, whose
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films about 17. 8 million.

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IELTS academic The table illustrates some interesting facts about some of the countries film watching activities in millions.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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