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The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1970 and 2005.

The bar chart describe information on the percentage of female going into well-known education in five countries for the years 1970 and 2005. Overall, as can be seen that from chart female school - leavers going into higher education is steadily. Canada is stable both 1970 and 2005. In 1970, Canada is the most popular, this country account for 60 percentage. Germany is a second rank higher 50 percentage. Japan ranked lowest among the five countries. USA is a third rank about 40 percentage. UK is a fourth rank about 35 percentage. The percentage of woman who continue studying for higher education in 2005 which Canada and UK steadily develop with 60 percentage. USA is a second rank about 56 percentage. Germany occupy a third position about 50 percentage. Japan is the smallest with 40 percentage Sum up, the percentage of women who continue studying for higher education increased in all countries between 1970 and 2005.
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. Canada is stable both 1970 and 2005.

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account for 60
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higher 50
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about 40
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about 35 percentage.

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of woman who continue studying for higher
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in 2005 which Canada and UK
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about 56
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. Germany
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a third position about 50
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. Japan is the smallest with 40 percentage

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increased in all
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between 1970 and 2005.
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IELTS academic The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1970 and 2005.

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