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The maps illustrate the information of Brindle and local areas which were built in 1800, 1900and 2000.

The maps illustrate the information of Brindle and local areas which were built in 1800, 1900and 2000. In first and second year, the farmland crops was located on the western wall as well as rivers tour was situated in the center of the map in 1800, 1900. Furthermore, in 1800 the Woodland area was established in north side. Apart from this, the Woodland area was reduced in 1900 as well as in 2000, location of woodland remained untouched. Moving further, in 1800, 1900 the brindle was situated in the same place; however, the area was doubled in next century. After that, in the southern side farmland area was converted into burn hill villages which were used by workers and developed with some industries. On northern side farmland and river stour some space occupied by burn hill park and Burn hill village area was increased and more industries were developed in the 2000. Overall, it can be educed that the area witnessed dramatic changes over the period and agricultural area was converted into industrial area.
The maps illustrate the information of Brindle and local
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areas
which
were built
in 1800, 1900and 2000.

In
first
and second year, the farmland crops
was located
on the western wall
as well
as rivers tour
was situated
in the center of the map in 1800, 1900.
Furthermore
, in 1800 the Woodland
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area
was established
in north side. Apart from this, the Woodland
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area
was
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reduced
in 1900
as well
as in 2000, location of woodland remained untouched.

Moving
further
, in 1800, 1900 the brindle
was situated
in the same place;
however
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
area
was doubled
in
next
century. After that, in the southern side farmland
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
area
was converted
into burn hill villages which were
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
by workers and developed with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
industries. On northern side farmland and
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river stour
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some
space occupied by burn hill park and Burn hill village
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area
was increased
and more industries
were developed
in the 2000.

Overall
, it can
be educed
that the
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area
witnessed dramatic
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
over the period and agricultural
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area
was converted
into industrial
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area
.
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IELTS academic The maps illustrate the information of Brindle and local areas which were built in 1800, 1900and 2000.

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