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The map given show the brindle and local area in 1800 and 1900,2000.

The maps illustrate the information of Brindle and local areas which were built in 1800, 1900and 2000. In first and second year, the farmland crops was located on the western wall as well as river stour was situated in the center of the map in 1800, 1900. Furthermore, in 1800 the Woodland area was established in north side. Apart from this, the Woodland area was reduced in 1900 as well as in 2000, location of woodland remained untouched.
The maps illustrate the information of Brindle and local areas which
were built
in 1800, 1900and 2000.

In
first
and second year, the farmland crops
was located
on the western wall
as well
as
Possible spelling mistake found.
river stour
was situated
in the center of the map in 1800, 1900.
Furthermore
, in 1800 the Woodland area
was established
in north side. Apart from this, the Woodland area was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
in 1900
as well
as in 2000, location of woodland remained untouched.
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IELTS academic The map given show the brindle and local area in 1800 and 1900, 2000.

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
78 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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