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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. E3Vb3
The bar chart below depicts the outcome of survey about indivuduals coffee, tea buying and drinking habits in five cities in Australia. Generally, it is calibarated in percentages. Overall, it is evident that majority of poeple in almost all states except adelaide visits cafe to have coffe/tea In terms of Sydney and Melbourne, it is observed that more than 60% of poeple visit cafe to have coffee/tea. While, both of them purchased coffee beans akmost equally which accounted for 44% and 43% respectively. On the other end, close to 50% of melbourne citizens purchased instant coffee whereas sydney was slightly lower (44% approximately) when compared. Moving to the other cities, it is lucid that Hobart spent most of their funds on coffee shops to buy coffee/tea followed by Brisbane and adealide at approximately 55% and 49% respectively. It is also noticable that atleast 50% of people in these cities had purchased instant coffee in last 4 weeks. In the meantime, Brisbane and Adeliade remained lowest in terms of spending on fresh coffeewith just under 35%. However, hobart figures was higher, at roughly 38%.
The bar chart below depicts the outcome of survey about
indivuduals
coffee
, tea buying and drinking habits in five cities in Australia.
Generally
, it is
calibarated
in percentages.

Overall
, it is evident that majority of
poeple
in almost all states except
adelaide
visits
cafe
to have
coffe
/tea

In terms of Sydney and Melbourne, it
is observed
that more than 60% of
poeple
visit
cafe
to have coffee/tea. While, both of them
purchased
coffee
beans
akmost
equally
which accounted for 44% and 43%
respectively
. On the other
end
, close to 50% of
melbourne
citizens
purchased
instant
coffee
whereas
sydney
was
slightly
lower (44% approximately) when compared.

Moving to the other cities, it is lucid that Hobart spent most of their funds on
coffee
shops to
buy
coffee/tea followed by Brisbane and
adealide
at approximately 55% and 49%
respectively
. It is
also
noticable
that
atleast
50% of
people
in these cities had
purchased
instant
coffee
in last 4 weeks. In the meantime, Brisbane and
Adeliade
remained lowest in terms of spending on fresh
coffeewith
just
under 35%.
However
,
hobart
figures was higher, at roughly 38%.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
183 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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