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The bar chart below shows the money spent per week on public transport by age group in Malaysia in the year 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the money spent per week on public transport by age group in Malaysia in the year 2008. awyDV
The bar chart illustrate the number of amount of currency spending on humankind transportation services individual week by five age group mankind in Malaysia, 2008. Firstly, in given information, who layman are under thirteen(under 30), they are using a rail service over a 35% repetition maximum per week but unfortunately the number of user are slowly decrease with older age. Secondly, the bus transportation services data are slightly fluctuated into age 50-65 other hand a group of layman over a 65 age the repetition percentages are rapidly down respectively. However in given information it is a clear that, All group of humankind prefer a taxi service, Leave all other local services. Over a 60% layman using a taxi service repetition maximum per week by under 50 age but a number slightly down over a 50 years old people, whereas a people passed age 65, the number of user are rapidly decrease 29 % to 19 % respectively. Overall, every group of age layman highly recommended a taxi service for traveling and less prefer the bus services during traveling.
The bar chart illustrate the
number
of amount of currency spending on humankind transportation
services
individual week by five
age
group
mankind in Malaysia, 2008.
Firstly
, in
given
information, who
layman
are
under thirteen(under 30), they are using a rail
service
over
a 35% repetition maximum per week
but
unfortunately the
number
of user are
slowly
decrease
with older
age
.
Secondly
, the bus transportation
services
data are
slightly
fluctuated into
age
50-65 other hand a
group
of
layman
over
a 65
age
the repetition percentages are
rapidly
down
respectively
.
However
in
given
information it is a
clear
that, All
group
of humankind prefer a taxi
service
,
Leave
all other local
services
.
Over
a 60%
layman
using a taxi
service
repetition maximum per week by under 50
age
but
a
number
slightly
down
over
a 50 years
old
people
, whereas a
people
passed
age
65, the
number
of user are
rapidly
decrease
29 % to 19 %
respectively
.
Overall
, every
group
of
age
layman
highly
recommended a taxi
service
for traveling and less prefer the bus
services
during traveling.
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the money spent per week on public transport by age group in Malaysia in the year 2008.

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