Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. 1D1M
The bar chart depicts the percentage of people who bought fresh coffee, instant coffee or went to a cafe for buying tea or coffee in five major Australian cities in a period of one month. Overall, it is evident that people in four out of five cities went to a cafe for buying coffee or tea. By contrast, fresh coffee was the least preferred choice in all the cities. Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that almost 63% of residents in Melbourne and Hobart went to a cafe in the last 4 weeks the most which is the highest compared to other cities, with 2% less Sydney stands second. While almost 50% of the natives in Adelaide either bought instant coffee or visited a cafe in the last month. Inhabitants of Sydney and Melbourne bought fresh coffee the most with approximately 43% and 42% respectively. About 34% of People in Brisbane and Adelaide purchased fresh coffee in the last 30 days.
The bar chart depicts the percentage of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fresh
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coffee
, instant
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coffee
or went to a
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
for buying tea or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coffee
in five major Australian cities in a period of one month.

Overall
, it is evident that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in four out of five cities went to a
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
for buying
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coffee
or tea. By contrast,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fresh
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coffee
was the least preferred choice in all the cities.

Looking at the information in more detail, we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
that almost 63% of residents in Melbourne and Hobart went to a
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
in the last 4 weeks the most which is the highest compared to other cities, with 2% less Sydney stands second. While almost 50% of the natives in Adelaide either
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
instant
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coffee
or visited a
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
in the last month.

Inhabitants of Sydney and Melbourne
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fresh
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coffee
the most with approximately 43% and 42%
respectively
. About 34% of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
People
in Brisbane and Adelaide
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fresh
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coffee
in the last 30 days.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
165 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts