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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. 151Dy
The chart provides information about the citizens’ habits of buying (purchase) and having coffee and tea in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart. Overall, in the last 4 weeks, most of the citizens’ preferred to buy coffee and tea from the cafe in all the cities except Adelaide, while the least contribution was made by fresh coffee in all the cities. According to the chart, more than 60% of the people in Melbourne, Sydney, and Hobart were drunk coffee and tea in the cafe in the last 4 weeks, while Brisbane is around 55%. Below 50% of the people in Adelaide went to the cafes in last 4 weeks, which is least compared to all other cities. Buying fresh coffee was the least popular among people in all the cities in the last 4 weeks, hence Sydney and Melbourne were around 44%, meanwhile below 35% of the people in Brisbane and Adelaide preferred and Hobart was exactly 39%. Instant coffee was the second popular habit in all the cities except Adelaide, above half of the people in Hobart and Brisbane bought instant coffee, meantime Adelaide and Melbourne were around 46%, and above 45% of people in Sydney preferred Instant Coffee.
The chart provides information about the citizens’ habits of buying (
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) and having
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coffee
and tea in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart.

Overall
, in the last 4
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weeks
, most of the citizens’ preferred to
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buy
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coffee
and tea from the
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cafe
in all the
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cities
except Adelaide, while the least contribution
was made
by fresh
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coffee
in all the cities.

According to the chart, more than 60% of the
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people
in Melbourne, Sydney, and Hobart
were drunk
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coffee
and tea in the
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cafe
in the last 4
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weeks
, while Brisbane is around 55%. Below 50% of the
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people
in Adelaide went to the
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cafes
in last 4
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weeks
, which is least compared to all other
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cities
. Buying fresh
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coffee
was the least popular among
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people
in all the
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cities
in the last 4
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weeks
,
hence
Sydney and Melbourne were around 44%, meanwhile below 35% of the
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people
in Brisbane and Adelaide preferred and Hobart was exactly 39%. Instant
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coffee
was the second popular habit in all the
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cities
except Adelaide, above half of the
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people
in Hobart and Brisbane
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bought
instant
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coffee
, meantime Adelaide and Melbourne were around 46%, and above 45% of
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people
in Sydney preferred Instant
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Coffee
.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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