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Pie chart depicts the information about a children charity which based on USA.

Pie chart depicts the information about a children charity which based on USA. 2brDX

Pie chart depicts the information about a children charity which based on USA. While first Poe chart represent revenue in contrast second pie chart indicate expenditure. To begin with pie chart, children charity had got 86. 6% food for increasing revenue source. Although, only 0. 2% government grants and 0. 2% investment income were both donated to the charity as revenue source. However, local community had liability to give some dollars to the charity for improving revenue source. Whereas 0. 4% other income and 2. 2% program were both adequate to improve basic revenue of children charity.

Pie You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintgraphsketchtable
chart
 depicts the information about a children You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundphilanthropyendowmentdonation
charity
 which based A determiner is probably missing here: "on the USA".on the USA
on USA
. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
first
 Poe You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintgraphsketchtable
chart
 represent You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalaryreturnwealthcreditpayreceipt
revenue
in contrast
 second pie You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintgraphsketchtable
chart
 indicate expenditure. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with pie You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintgraphsketchtable
chart
, children You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundphilanthropyendowmentdonation
charity
 had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 86. 6% food for increasing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalaryreturnwealthcreditpayreceipt
revenue
 source. Although, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 0. 2% This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 grants and 0. 2% investment income were both donated to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundphilanthropyendowmentdonation
charity
 as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalaryreturnwealthcreditpayreceipt
revenue
 source. However
, local community had liability to give This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 dollars to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundphilanthropyendowmentdonation
charity
 for improving You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalaryreturnwealthcreditpayreceipt
revenue
 source. Whereas 0. 4% other income and 2. 2% program were both adequate to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 basic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalaryreturnwealthcreditpayreceipt
revenue
 of children You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundphilanthropyendowmentdonation
charity
. 