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The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. bYDPq
The line graph gives information about how many million visitors came to a particular Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. The visitors are categrised into the 2 groups, people who stayed on cruise ship, and on island. Overall, it is clearly seen that the total number of tourists hit a peak in 2017 (exactly 3. 5 million) during the given period time. In detail, number of people who visited a Caribbean island and stayd on cruise ships in 2011 is precisely a half million, while that of who stayed on island is approximately 0. 7 million. From 2011 to 2013, the trend in number of visitors that stayed on cruise ships is upward. During the same time period, there was a slight dip in visitor number, stayed on island. On the other hand, total numer of visitors are gradually increase between 2010 and 2015. From 2016 to 2017, the number of them rocketd (from around 2. 7 million to 3. 5 million).
The line graph gives information about how
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came to a particular Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. The
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of tourists hit a peak in 2017 (exactly 3. 5
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during the
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In detail,
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, while that of who
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. From 2011 to 2013, the trend in
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on cruise ships is upward. During the same time period, there was a slight dip in
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,
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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