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The chart below shows the result f a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

The chart illustrates the number of tea and coffee consumtion of 5 cities in Australia which are, Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart. The chart is presented in percentage with 4 weeks timeframe. Overall, most of the survey audiences chose to go to a cafe for either tea or coffee, while the least is buying fresh coffee First, starting with Sydney, cafe was popular and covering around 61%. Eventhough fresh and instant coffee have a different taste, the gap between both was not exceeding 5%. Second, the city of Melbourne, had a similar result like Sydney. With instant coffee had a percetage of approximately 47%, while fresh bought coffee only covering arount 42%. Like Sydney, cafe was still the most famous (around 63%). Next, Brisbane had the least part of people buying the fresh coffee (around 34%). Instant coffee was toe to toe with cafe's with only around 3% seperating them. The city of Adelaide had a higher demand for instant coffee than the rest of them, although cafe was popular in the chart, only around 49% were rooting for them. and like the previous result, fresh made was the less favorable (around 34%). The last city is Hobart, covering almost 63% for cafe. on the other hand, both instant and fresh had a big gap ( approximately 54% and 37% respectively).
The chart illustrates the number of tea and
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consumtion
of 5
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cities
in Australia which are, Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart. The chart
is presented
in percentage with 4 weeks timeframe.
Overall
, most of the survey audiences chose to go to a
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cafe
for either tea or
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coffee
, while the least is buying
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fresh
coffee

First
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cafe
was popular and covering
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61%.
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Eventhough
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fresh
and instant
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coffee
have a
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different
taste, the gap between both was not exceeding 5%. Second, the city of Melbourne, had a similar result like Sydney. With instant
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coffee
had a
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percetage
of approximately 47%, while
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fresh
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bought
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coffee
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only
covering
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arount
42%. Like Sydney,
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cafe
was
still
the most
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famous
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(around
63%).
Next
, Brisbane had the least part of
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people
buying the
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fresh
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coffee
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(around
34%). Instant
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coffee
was toe to toe with
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cafe
's with
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only
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around
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seperating
them.

The city of Adelaide had a higher demand for instant
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coffee
than the rest of them, although
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cafe
was popular in the chart,
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only
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around
49% were rooting for them.
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and
like the previous result,
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fresh
made was the less favorable
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(around
34%). The last city is Hobart, covering almost 63% for
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.
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on
the other hand, both instant and
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fresh
had a
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big
gap
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(
approximately 54% and 37%
respectively
).
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