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The chart below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.

The two pie charts display the key reasons why people choose to either cycle or drive to work by percentage.  The largest proportion of people who cycle, have made this choice for health and environmental reasons whilst the prime advantage of driving to work is considered to be the comfort of travelling by car. Notably, for an almost equal proportion of people, their chosen method is the fastest. Taken together, health and fitness and less pollution are reasons given by over half of all people who prefer travelling by bike. Each represents a 30% portion which is double the next most popular reason which is a lack of parking issues at 15%. A different set of concerns has affected the decision of those who choose to commute by car. Comfort is by far the most significant factor at 40% of people, but distance to work is a more important concern for just over a fifth of drivers. For 14% of people, a faster journey time is the key factor compared to a figure of 12% of cyclists who find their means of transport quicker.
The two pie charts display the key
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which is a lack of parking issues at 15%. A
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, a faster journey time is the key factor compared to a figure of 12% of cyclists
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.

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