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The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The presented illustration of the pie chart provides information about career choice of graduates in Brighton University, 2019. Overall, it can be clearly that, the largest percentage of career choice was service industries, almost thirty graduates chose this job. It is conspicuous that, majority of the graduates from Brighton University chose this career, service industries were more popular than other figures, and this service industries accounted 33. 0%. Manufacturing industry and politics, government were well-known as service industries as well. For example, nearly 16. 3% of graduates went into the manufacturing industry. Also, most graduates of Brighton university went into politics and government, reaching almost 12. 1%. On the contrast, the less popular were sport and charity, the percentage was only 0. 1% and 0. 3%.
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graduates
in Brighton University, 2019.

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industries
, almost thirty
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graduates
chose this job.

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graduates
from Brighton University chose this career,

service
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industries
were more popular than other figures, and this service
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industries
accounted 33. 0%. Manufacturing
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industry
and politics,
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government
were well-known as service
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nearly
16. 3% of
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graduates
went into the manufacturing
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Also
, most
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of Brighton university went into politics and
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, reaching almost 12. 1%.

On the contrast, the less popular were sport and charity, the percentage was
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors.

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