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Describing a process that is producing animal skin.

Describing a process that is producing animal skin. oMrw

The diagram illustrates the procedure of producing animal skin and skinny yields. Overall, there are 11 stages until producing skinny products. The process begin when dried animal skin is brought to the factory. After that, before soaking to the tannin which is included water and vegetable matter, then it is washed on water with lime and then it is soaked in lime. After some time, it is flatted. On the next stage, it is polished on the special machine. Over the following stage, all animal skins are gathered and delivered to the other factories that produce yields that are made from animal skin. The process ends with producing skinny products such as shoes and bag.

The diagram illustrates the procedure of producing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnaturalbodily
animal
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skin
 and skinny yields. Overall
, there are 11 stages until producing skinny products.

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begin
 when dried You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnaturalbodily
animal
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skin
is brought
 to the factory. After that, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 soaking to the tannin which is included
 water and vegetable matter, then it is washed
 on water with lime and then it is soaked
 in lime. After This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time, it is flatted
. On the next
 stage, it is polished
 on the special machine. Over the following stage, all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnaturalbodily
animal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurcoatingcrustsurfacejackethusk
skins
are gathered
 and delivered to the other factories that produce yields that are made
 from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnaturalbodily
animal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurcoatingcrustsurfacejackethusk
skin
. The process ends with producing skinny products such as shoes and bag. 