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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. mn38
The provided maps illustrate the layout of an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Overall, the island developed numerous attractions for visitors, which may have benefited local businesses and expanded the job outlook. As mentioned, a restaurant has been built on the North shore. This is connected by a vehicle track to the reception area, leading to the pier on the South beach. Besides, accommodations have been constructed on the east and west sides of the reception area. Moreover, at the west end, the beach area has been conserved and adapted for swimming.
The provided maps illustrate the layout of an island
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before
and after the construction of
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some
tourist facilities.
Overall
, the island developed numerous attractions for visitors, which may have benefited local businesses and expanded the job outlook. As mentioned, a restaurant has
been built
on the North shore. This
is connected
by a vehicle
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
track
to the reception area, leading to the pier on the South beach.
Besides
, accommodations have
been constructed
on the east and west sides of the reception area.
Moreover
, at the west
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
, the beach area has
been conserved
and adapted for swimming.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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