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The chart below shows the percentage of young people taking part in different outdoor sports from 1975 to the present day in the South West of England. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of young people taking part in different outdoor sports from 1975 to the present day in the South West of England. 0axM1
The line graph illustrates the proportion of young people participating in various kinds of sport from 1975 to current times in the South West of England. Overall, ball games and biking/roller skating are becoming less popular while swimming and jogging/ running are showing a contrasting trend. As can be seen from the chart, in 1975, 34% of the young choose ball games to play, making it the most popular outdoor sport compared to the other four. However, this figure has decreased to 20% at present. Biking/ roller skating have shown a similar trend with 25% of youngsters participated in 1975 went down to 16% at present. On the contrary, swimming had only 14% of the youth taking part in at the beginning but the percentage had dramatically grown up by 20%. There saw a fluctuation in jogging/ running’s figure, from 7% in 1975 rose slightly to 13% in 1985, then continued to fall until it recovered and reached a peak of 14% today.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of young
people
participating in various kinds of sport from 1975 to
current
times in the South West of England.

Overall
, ball games and biking/roller skating are becoming less popular while swimming and jogging/ running are showing a contrasting trend.

As can be
seen
from the chart, in 1975, 34% of the young choose ball games to play, making it the most popular outdoor sport compared to the other four.
However
, this figure has decreased to 20% at present. Biking/ roller skating have shown a similar trend with 25% of youngsters participated in 1975 went down to 16% at present.

On the contrary
, swimming had
only
14% of the youth taking part in at the beginning
but
the percentage had
dramatically
grown up by 20%. There
saw
a fluctuation in jogging/ running’s figure, from 7% in 1975 rose
slightly
to 13% in 1985, then continued to fall until it recovered and reached a peak of 14%
today
.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of young people taking part in different outdoor sports from 1975 to the present day in the South West of England.

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