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Percentage of young people taking part in different outdoor sports

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The line graph indicates the ratio of adolescents participating in various kinds of sport over a period of three decades to current times in the South West of England. Over the period, swimming and jogging/running are becoming favored while ballgames and biking/roller skating show opposite movement. Moving on, the line graph illustrates that ball games were the most popular outdoor sport with over 34% compared to the other three activities. However, the figure illustrates a dramatic drop to 20% at present. Biking/roller skating have shown similar fluctuation on the contrary with various proportions. Around 25% of young people participated hence, it decreased to 16% at present-time. On the contrary, swimming had only 14% of youngsters taking part yet it leveled up by 20%. As well as the shift in jogging/running’s figure, from 8% in 1990 to 18% in 2000, then resumed to fall until it leveled up and reached a peak of 15% at this moment.
The line graph indicates the ratio of adolescents participating in various kinds of sport over a period of three decades to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
times in the South West of England.

Over the period, swimming and jogging/running are becoming favored while ballgames and biking/roller skating
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show
opposite movement. Moving on, the line graph illustrates that ball games were the most popular outdoor sport with over 34% compared to the other three activities.
However
, the figure illustrates a dramatic drop to 20% at present. Biking/roller skating have shown similar fluctuation
on the contrary
with various proportions. Around 25% of young
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
participated
hence
, it decreased to 16% at present-time.

On the contrary
, swimming had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
14% of youngsters taking part
yet
it leveled up by 20%.
As well
as the shift in jogging/running’s figure, from 8% in 1990 to 18% in 2000, then resumed to fall until it leveled up and reached a peak of 15% at this moment.
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