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The pie chart describes the number of Coca-Cola bottles sold by sectors in 2000 while the line graph illustrates the share prices for Coca-Cola.

The pie chart describes the number of Coca-Cola bottles sold by sectors in 2000 while the line graph illustrates the share prices for Coca-Cola. 5kGBm
The pie chart describes the number of Coca-Cola bottles sold by sectors in 2000 while the line graph illustrates the share prices for Coca-Cola. Overall, it is clear that the highest number of Coca-Cola bottles sales was recorded in North America while the lowest number of sales belonged to Africa and Middle East. In addition, the share price of Coca-Cola increased from $30 in 1996 to more than $70 in 1998. As shown in the pie chart, in 2000, Coca-Cola sold a total of 17. 1 million cases of their fizzy drink product worldwide. Particularly, the largest proportion of the consumer was recorded in North America, accounting for 30. 4 percent of total sales. The next three categories had smaller rates, starting with Latin America (25. 7%) progressing through Europe (20. 5%) to Asia (16. 4%). The minority consumer was Africa, with only 7 percent of total sales. Turing the line graph, since 1996, share prices for Coca-Cola have fluctuated. Particularly, the figure witnessed at approximately $35. However, this figure dramatically increased between 1996 and 1997, with about $70 per share, and then decreased slightly in mid-1997. The share price then reached a peak of $80 per share in 1998. From then until 2000 their value declined consistently, but there was a slight rise in mid-2000.
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the number of Coca-Cola bottles sold by sectors in 2000 while the line graph illustrates the
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Overall
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that the highest number of Coca-Cola bottles sales
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in North America while the lowest number of sales belonged to Africa and Middle East.
In addition
, the
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share
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of Coca-Cola increased from $30 in 1996 to more than $70 in 1998.

As shown in the pie chart, in 2000, Coca-Cola sold a total of 17. 1 million cases of their fizzy drink product worldwide.
Particularly
, the largest proportion of the consumer
was recorded
in North America, accounting for 30. 4 percent of total sales. The
next
three categories had smaller rates, starting with Latin America (25. 7%) progressing through Europe (20. 5%) to Asia (16. 4%). The minority consumer was Africa, with
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only
7 percent of total sales.

Turing the line graph, since 1996,
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share
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prices
for Coca-Cola have fluctuated.
Particularly
, the figure witnessed at approximately $35.
However
, this figure
dramatically
increased between 1996 and 1997, with about $70 per
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share
, and then decreased
slightly
in mid-1997. The
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share
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price
then reached a peak of $80 per
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share
in 1998. From then until 2000 their value declined
consistently
,
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there was a slight rise in mid-2000.
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