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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The following two maps are presenting some information about how the routes provide access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. There have been a few huge changes since 2007 about the main ways of transportation. Obviously, the fundamental structure of the hospital and the ring road has still remained. in 2007, there were six bus stops on the left and right side of the hospital Rd, However, they are replaced with two roundabouts which one of which connects the hospital Rd to the city road and the next one is in the ring road entrance. instead of bus stops, a bus station is built down the corner of the hospital and is related to the squares with tiny roads. the next main difference that can be seen on the 2010 map is about two great parking spaces. Normal people and staff used to share the car park behind the bus stops, but nowadays, the public have their own parking car park is now available as staff-only.
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hospital
in 2007 and 2010. There have been a few huge
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changes
since 2007 about the main ways of transportation.
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hospital
and the ring
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road
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in
2007, there were six bus
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stops
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left
and right side of the
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hospital
Rd,
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Rd to the city
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and the
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entrance.
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instead
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stops
, a bus station
is built
down the corner of the
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hospital
and
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to the squares with tiny
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the
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main difference that can be
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on the 2010 map is about two great parking spaces. Normal
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people
and staff
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to share the car park behind the bus
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parking car park is
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available as staff-
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IELTS academic The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

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