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The first char below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which result from energy use. Summerise the information by selectingvand reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The following chart are presenting some information about spending energy and producing greenhouse gas in average in houses of Australia. As it is obvious, most of the energy Is used for heating and offer that for the water heating with the percentage of 42% and 30%. These amounts change when it goes to the greenhouse emissions. The first place is taken by the water heating with 32%, then there are other appliances with 28%. The heating production of gas includes 15 per cent of total portion. Although both lighting and refrigeration demand less energy in household use, but the gas emissions of those are doubled in order from 4% to 8% and 7% to 14%. Cooling consumption takes 2% of energy resource use and has a tiny increase of 1 per cent of gas outputs. It has still maintained its place at the bottom of the ranking. The refrigeration also is at the same place as it is at energy expenditure chart.
The following chart are presenting
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some
information about spending
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energy
and producing greenhouse
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gas
in average in
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houses
of Australia.

As it is obvious, most of the
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energy
Is
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used
for
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heating
and offer that for the water
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heating
with the percentage of 42% and 30%. These amounts
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change
when it goes to the greenhouse emissions. The
first
place
is taken
by the water
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heating
with 32%, then there are other appliances with 28%. The
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heating
production of
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gas
includes 15 per cent of total portion.

Although both lighting and refrigeration demand less
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energy
in household
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use
,
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but
the
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gas
emissions of those
are doubled
in order from 4% to 8% and 7% to 14%.

Cooling consumption takes 2% of
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energy
resource
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use
and has a tiny increase of 1 per cent of
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gas
outputs. It has
still
maintained its place at the bottom of the ranking. The refrigeration
also
is at the same place as it is at
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energy
expenditure chart.
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IELTS academic The first char below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which result from energy use.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
162 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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