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The three diagrams below show the development of, and plans for, the coastal zone of Brightsea. Summaries the information by choosing and reporting the key features, and make any relevant comparisons.

The three diagrams below show the development of, and plans for, the coastal zone of Brightsea. 6jpj
The picture illustrates the development of brightsea plant for three times in the past, today, and the future. Overall, some changes will be seen in the accomodation and leisure amenities, while the lighthouse show to be the same. When it comes to the north-east area in today, the cafe is replaced with the fishermen’s cottages, while in the east area the developers are built the shop. Also, the hotel is changed from the lighthouse keeper’s house in the south-east region, and extending the roads is built along the coastal sea, and building the ferry wharf is in the west area. However, in the future the brightsea will develop the restaurant and apartments, replacing the cafe in the north-east area, while the car park and supermarket will add in the east area, also the same area the shop will extend. Moreover, in the beside hotel will expand and develop sailing club for visitors, then telecommunications antenna will construct with the new ferry wharf. Overall, some changes will be seen in the accomodation and leisure amenities, while the lighthouse show to be the same. When it comes to the north-east area in today, the cafe is replaced with the fishermen’s cottages, while in the east area the developers are built the shop. Also, the hotel is changed from the lighthouse keeper’s house in the south-east region, and extending the roads is built along the coastal sea, and building the ferry wharf is in the west area. However, in the future the brightsea will develop the restaurant and apartments, replacing the cafe in the north-east area, while the car park and supermarket will add in the east area, also the same area the shop will extend. Moreover, in the beside hotel will expand and develop sailing club for visitors, then telecommunications antenna will construct with the new ferry wharf.
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brightsea
plant for three times in the past,
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today
, and the future.

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,
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some
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changes
will be
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seen
in the
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accomodation
and leisure amenities, while the
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lighthouse
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show
to be the same.

When it
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comes
to the north-east
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area
in
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today
, the
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cafe
is replaced
with the fishermen’s cottages, while in the east
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area
the developers
are built
the
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shop
.
Also
, the
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hotel
is
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changed
from the
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lighthouse
keeper’s
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house
in the south-east region, and extending the roads
is built
along the coastal sea, and building the
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ferry
wharf is in the west area.

However
, in the future the
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brightsea
will
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develop
the restaurant and apartments, replacing the
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
in the north-east
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area
, while the car park and supermarket will
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add
in the east
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area
,
also
the same
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area
the
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shop
will extend.
Moreover
, in the beside
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hotel
will expand and
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develop
sailing club for visitors, then
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telecommunications
antenna will construct with the new
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ferry
wharf.

Overall
,
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some
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changes
will be
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seen
in the
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accomodation
and leisure amenities, while the
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lighthouse
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show
to be the same.

When it
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comes
to the north-east
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area
in
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today
, the
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
is replaced
with the fishermen’s cottages, while in the east
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
area
the developers
are built
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shop
.
Also
, the
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hotel
is
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changed
from the
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lighthouse
keeper’s
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house
in the south-east region, and extending the roads
is built
along the coastal sea, and building the
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ferry
wharf is in the west area.

However
, in the future the
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brightsea
will
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develop
the restaurant and apartments, replacing the
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
in the north-east
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area
, while the car park and supermarket will
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add
in the east
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area
,
also
the same
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area
the
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shop
will extend.
Moreover
, in the beside
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hotel
will expand and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
develop
sailing club for visitors, then
Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "telecommunications'" or "telecommunication's"?
telecommunications
antenna will construct with the new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ferry
wharf.
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IELTS academic The three diagrams below show the development of, and plans for, the coastal zone of Brightsea.

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