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The three diagrams below show the development of, and plans for, the coastal zone of Brightsea. Summaries the information by choosing and reporting the key features, and make any relevant comparisons.

The three diagrams below show the development of, and plans for, the coastal zone of Brightsea. 5j2m
The picture illustrates the development of bright sea plant for three times in the past, today, and the future. Overall, a number of changes will be seen in the accommodation and leisure amenities, while the lighthouse show to be the same. When it comes to the north-east area in today, the café is replaced with the fishermen’s cottages, while in the east area the developers are built the shop. Also, the hotel is changed from the lighthouse keeper’s house in the south-east region, and extending the roads is built along the coastal sea, and building the ferry wharf is in the west area. However, in the future the bright sea will develop the restaurant and apartments, replacing the café in the north-east area, while the car park and supermarket will add in the east area, also the same area the shop will extend. Moreover, in the beside hotel will expand and develop sailing club for visitors, then telecommunications' antenna will construct with the new ferry wharf.
The picture illustrates the development of bright sea plant for three times in the past,
today
, and the future.

Overall
, a number of
changes
will be
seen
in the accommodation and leisure amenities, while the lighthouse
show
to be the same.

When it
comes
to the north-east
area
in
today
, the café
is replaced
with the fishermen’s cottages, while in the east
area
the developers
are built
the shop.
Also
, the hotel is
changed
from the lighthouse keeper’s
house
in the south-east region, and extending the roads
is built
along the coastal sea, and building the ferry wharf is in the west area.

However
, in the future the bright sea will develop the restaurant and apartments, replacing the café in the north-east
area
, while the car park and supermarket will
add
in the east
area
,
also
the same
area
the shop will extend.
Moreover
, in the beside hotel will expand and develop sailing club for visitors, then telecommunications' antenna will construct with the new ferry wharf.
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IELTS academic The three diagrams below show the development of, and plans for, the coastal zone of Brightsea.

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4 paragraphs
166 words
6.5
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