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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 lO3W

The chat illustrates the percentage of households in owned and rented accommondation in the period of time between 1918 to 2011 in the country England and Wales. The differentation of households owning and rent accommodation are quite contrasted when compared past years and recent years. Firsty, there is a gradual increase in the owned accommodation from 1918 to 2001 but all of a sudden it has been reduced a bit in 2011 when compared to 2001 statistics. Eventually the same statergy has been followed by rented accommodation but the diffrence is the rented accommodation has started its reduction from 1918 to 2001 and had grown up in 2011. However in 1971 both the accommadation are in equal percentage which is 50 and then aftr the years passed there is a huge difference in both. In 1918 the percentage of households of owned is 20 and rented is around 85, After years passed the owned and rented hay been changed to around 65 and 85 respectively.

The chat illustrates the percentage of households in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchased
owned
 and rented Possible spelling mistake found.accommodation
accommondation
 in the period of time Use "between" + "and" not "to."  Try this: "between 1918 and 2011".between 1918 and 2011
between 1918 to 2011
 in the country England and Wales. The Possible spelling mistake found.differentiation
differentation
 of households owning and rent You use this word too often, consider replacing it withreconciliationcompromise
accommodation
 are quite contrasted when compared past years and recent years. Possible spelling mistake found.FirstFirstlyFirstsFir styFirst yKirsty
Firsty
, there is a gradual increase in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchased
owned
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withreconciliationcompromise
accommodation
 from 1918 to 2001 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 all of a sudden it has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 a bit in 2011 when compared to 2001 statistics.

Eventually
 the same Possible spelling mistake found.strategystatelystater
statergy
 has been followed
 by rented You use this word too often, consider replacing it withreconciliationcompromise
accommodation
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the Possible spelling mistake found.difference
diffrence
 is the rented You use this word too often, consider replacing it withreconciliationcompromise
accommodation
 has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 its reduction from 1918 to 2001 and had grown up in 2011.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 in 1971 both the Possible spelling mistake found.accommodation
accommadation
 are in equal percentage which is 50 and then Possible spelling mistake found.aftereighteighthafteightyafar
aftr
 the years passed there is a huge difference in both.

In 1918 the percentage of households of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchased
owned
 is 20 and rented is around 85, After years passed the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchased
owned
 and rented hay been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 to around 65 and 85 respectively
. 