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The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. 3r8n
The diagram demonstrates different industries percentage such as finance, food processing manufacturing, tourism and oil, coal, gas of economy in Brazil in given period of time (2009, 2019 and a prediction for 2029). Overall, the biggest proportion had finance among all industries and the biggest one will have in the future according to the forecast. Food processing showed the smallest percentage of all given industries in 2009. Manufacturing represented the smallest percentage share in 2019 and it might be the smallest one by 2029. The prediction says that finance will have just over 40 % among all industries by 2029. Manufacturing in 2019 had about 15 % and the forecast shows a significant decrease of percentage by 2029 (only 5%). Food processing and tourism demonstrates over 20 %, the same as manufacturing in 2019 and predictions for tourism by 2029. However, tourism, oil, coal and gas industries showed bigger percentage in 2009 (just over 25%). The same percentage share might have oil, coal, gas in 2019. Finance and energy sources represented about 32% in 2009. Food processing in 2009 had above 10 % totally the same as percentage prediction of it by 2029.
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finance
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processing
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,
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finance
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Food
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processing
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in 2009.
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represented the smallest
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share in 2019 and it might be the smallest one by 2029.

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over 40 % among all
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by 2029.
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Manufacturing
in 2019 had about 15 % and the forecast
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, oil, coal and gas
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in 2009 (
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over 25%). The same
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and energy sources represented about 32% in 2009.
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Food
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in 2009 had above 10 %
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prediction
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IELTS academic The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
193 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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