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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates the statistics of owned accommodation and rented ones in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Overall, it can be evidently seen that While the levels of choosing private house observed upward tendency during these years, houses, which are rented by people, underwent decreasing between 1918 and 2011. In terms of between 1918 and 1971 years, rented accommodation which was the lead in 1918, with 78%, was equal to owned ones, which was 22% in the initial year, by falling down 50%. The statistics of both them are equal to each other in 1971, with 50%. From 1971 onwards, the percent of owned house had risen by 2001, from 50% to 69%, with rented house experiencing downward trend, from 50% to 30%. Between 2001 and 2011, the statistics of first one had decreased by 62% and latter one had grown by 38%.
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accommodation and rented
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in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

Overall
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evidently
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that While the levels of choosing private
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observed upward tendency during these years,
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houses
, which
are rented
by
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people
, underwent decreasing between 1918 and 2011.

In terms of between 1918 and 1971 years, rented accommodation which was the lead in 1918, with 78%, was equal to
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owned
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, which was 22% in the initial year, by falling down 50%. The statistics of both them are equal to each other in 1971, with 50%.

From 1971 onwards, the percent of
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owned
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had risen by 2001, from 50% to 69%, with rented
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experiencing downward trend, from 50% to 30%. Between 2001 and 2011, the statistics of
first
one had decreased by 62% and latter one had grown by 38%.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

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