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The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

When travelling to a different country there are many differents activities to do and places to go. Choosing what it is the best to do is a personal decision and it differs a lot from each person. Although there are advantages of going to tourist attractions, the positives of choosing for quiet and non touristic place outweigh the negatives. It i my firm belief that the best way of enjoying a trip to another country is to go to places where it is not touristic. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explain in the following paragraphs. To begin with, in my opinion travelling is an opportunity to relax and to learn about different cultures. So, when travelling, I definitely prefer to go to a place where it is far away from the city center and where I can see how the local people live. Moreover, I think that when doing this, I am also able to interact with them and to know about how they live. My experience has taught me that this is the best choice. Some years ago I went to Thailand. There, I chose for going to places where tourists does not go and it was an incredule experience. I started to talk with the local people and I learnt about different aspects of their lifes. Moreover, I built a long term relationship with one of them, that made me feel even happier. At the end of this trip, I had a lot of knowleage about Thailand and about their lifestyle. Moreover, I also felt really relaxed because of the conversations that I had with them. Additionally, going to another country is the best opportunity to try differents foods. For this reason, I strongly believe that the only way to do this it is when you go to the suburbs of the places that you are visiting. During my backpacker trip, I visited many places and I was always eating in restaurants. When I ate food from the restaurants located in the city center and in the tourist places I could not find the proper local food. The options of food were actually from others country, but not the country that I was visiting. For example, when I went to Brazil, I was able to find the typical food just after a couple of days. In the beginning, I was going to places where foreign people were going and I was able to find just american food. After asking for a brazilian person where could I find the best brazilian meal, she told me that I would need to go other areas. I followed her recommendation, and I needed to drive for one hour, but I finally ate the typical brazillian food, which made me very happy. To conclude, when travelling to other countries, I definitely prefer to go to places where I can socialize with the people from the country where I am going to. I strongly believe that when you do not it, you are not able to really enjoy your trip because you are not learning about the local people and the country. Additionally, you are not also able to experience the food from that place.
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country
there are
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differents
activities to do and
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places
to go. Choosing what it is the
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best
to do is a personal
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decision and
it differs a lot from each person. Although there are advantages of going to tourist attractions, the positives of choosing for quiet and
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non touristic
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place
outweigh the negatives. It
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i
my firm belief that the
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best
way of enjoying a
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trip
to another
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country
is to go to
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places
where it is not touristic. I feel this way for several reasons which I will
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explain
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with, in my opinion
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travelling
is an opportunity to relax and to learn about
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different
cultures.
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travelling
, I definitely prefer to go to a
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place
where it is far away from the city center and where I can
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see
how the
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local
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people
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live
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think
that when doing this, I am
also
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to interact with them and to know about how they
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live
. My experience has taught me that this is the
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best
choice.
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Some
years ago I went to Thailand. There, I chose for going to
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places
where tourists
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go and
it was an
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incredule
experience. I
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started
to talk with the
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local
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people
and I
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learnt
about
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different
aspects of their
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lifes
.
Moreover
, I built a long term relationship with one of them, that made me feel even happier. At the
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end
of this
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trip
, I had
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a lot of
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knowleage
about Thailand and about their lifestyle.
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also
felt
really
relaxed
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because
of the conversations that I had with them.

Additionally
, going to another
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country
is the
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best
opportunity to try
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differents
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foods
.
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strongly
believe that the
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only
way to do this it is when you go to the suburbs of the
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places
that you are visiting. During my backpacker
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trip
, I visited
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places and
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food
from the restaurants located in the city center and in the tourist
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places
I could not
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find
the proper
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local
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food
. The options of
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food
were actually from others
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country
,
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but
not the
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country
that I was visiting.
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to
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the typical
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food
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after a couple of days. In the beginning, I was going to
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where foreign
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people
were
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going and
I was
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able
to
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find
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just
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american
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food
. After asking for a
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brazilian
person where could I
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best
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meal, she
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brazillian
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food
, which made me
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To conclude
, when
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travelling
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countries
, I definitely prefer to go to
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places
where I can socialize with the
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people
from the
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country
where I am going to. I
strongly
believe that when you do not it, you are not
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able
to
really
enjoy your
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trip
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because
you are not learning about the
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local
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people
and the
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country
.
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able
to experience the
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food
from that
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport.

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