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The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Process of electricity generation using hydroelectric power station is illustrated in the given diagram. First of all, water flow of the river is obstacle by gigantic wall of dam and play thoda water collected in high level reservoir. then to generate electricity, potential energy of water in reservior is used to rotate the turbine which is connected to generator with help of shaft. In other words during day time least water from high altitude too low level reservior is used to provide torque to turbine to generate electricity. At the same time, with help of power lines which is connected to national grid electricity is distributed to Nation from power station. To continue generation of power and to maintain adequate water level in high level reservior, during night turbine is used to pump the water in reverse direction from low level To high level reservior. All in all, power station which includes generator and reversible turbine are used to convert potential energy of water to electrical energy with help of special arrangements at the dam site.
Process of
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electricity
generation using hydroelectric
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power
station
is illustrated
in the
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given
diagram.

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First of all
,
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water
flow of the river is obstacle by gigantic wall of dam and play
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thoda
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water
collected in
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high
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level
reservoir.
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then
to generate
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electricity
, potential energy of
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water
in
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reservior
is
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used
to rotate the
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turbine
which
is connected
to generator with
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help
of shaft.
In other words
during day time
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least
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water
from
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high
altitude too low
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level
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reservior
is
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used
to provide torque to
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turbine
to generate
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electricity
. At the same time, with
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help
of
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power
lines which
is connected
to national grid
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electricity
is distributed
to Nation from
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power
station.

To continue generation of
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power
and to maintain adequate
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water
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level
in
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high
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level
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reservior
, during night
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turbine
is
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used
to pump the
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water
in reverse direction from low
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level
To
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high
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level
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reservior
.

All in all,
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power
station which includes generator and reversible
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turbine
are
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used
to convert potential energy of
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water
to electrical energy with
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help
of special arrangements at the dam site.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

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6.0
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