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The chart below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years.

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The chart highlights the number of movies manufactured in A, B, C, D, and E countries in the years 2007, 2008, and 2009. Overall, A country was the biggest film-produced country while the second-highest amount of movie produced by the country B. Another interesting fact is that countries C, D, and E produced about the same number of films. In 2007 country A produced the most films approximately 87 movies and this figure remained unchanged the next year before decreasing to 80 in 2009. By comparison, the second the most films produced country was B to 50 films in 2007. Country B produced 3 more films the next year compared to countries C, D, E. The smallest number of films made in countries C, D, and E. AprroximateLy 8 films were created in C in the first year before this figure increased twofold in 2008 and finally reached 18 movies in 2009. County D produced more films about 15 compared to E about 10 films in 2007. In the last year, counties' D and E films production were the sAme approximately 12 films.
The chart highlights the number of
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manufactured in A, B, C, D, and E
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countries
in the years 2007, 2008, and 2009.
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, A
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was the biggest film-produced
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while the second-highest amount of
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by the
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B. Another interesting fact is that
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C, D, and E
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about the same number of films. In 2007
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A
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the most films approximately 87
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and this figure remained unchanged the
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decreasing to 80 in 2009. By comparison, the second the most films
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produced
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was B to 50 films in 2007.
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B
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3 more films the
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compared to
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C, D, E. The smallest number of films made in
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C, D, and E.
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first
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this figure increased twofold in 2008 and
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in 2009. County D
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more films about 15 compared to E about 10 films in 2007. In the last
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, counties' D and E films production were the
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approximately 12 films.
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