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The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years.

The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years. KLk0
The line chart compares humans who moved to urban areas from rural areas in Iran, Indonesia, and Russia over 20 years and its future predictions. The data gave in a million people per year. Overall, it is seen clearly from the given line graph that the data of people who lived in cities for all countries increased drastically throughout the years. Iran estimated that at the top position in the future. In 2020, 8 million people moved to an urban area in Iran, which was the lowest on this list. Whereas in Russia and Indonesia were 16 million and 10 million people who chose to move to the city respectively. However, in the following 20 years, the number of all countries increased drastically, more than 75 million people in Russia and Iran moved to city areas from rural areas, while only 30 million people of Indonesia stayed in cities by 2020. In 2025, it will estimate that Iran overtook Russia become the highest number of people who moved to metropolitan areas, with over 90 million Iran citizens compared with 87 million Russians. Moreover, Indonesia remained constant at 30 million in this list.
The line chart compares humans
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in Iran, Indonesia, and Russia over 20 years and its future predictions. The data gave in a
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for all countries increased
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In 2020, 8
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in Iran, which was the lowest on this list. Whereas in Russia and Indonesia were 16
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and 10
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in Russia and Iran
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of Indonesia stayed in
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Iran citizens compared with 87
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years.

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