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The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001

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The pie charts compare the changes in the percentage of annual expenditure by a specific school in the UK in three different years. Overall, teachers' salaries took up the largest proportion of the school’s spending in all three years; while insurance made up the smallest percentage. In 1981; spending on teachers salaries accounted for 40% of the schools’ budget. This figure rose minimally to 50% in 1991, but then dropped to 45% in 2001. The proportion of spending in other workers’ salaries decreased steadily over the 20-year-period; from 28% in 1981 to 15% in 2001. 2% of the schools’ budget was spent on insurance in 1981. However, this figure rose fourfold to 8% in 2001. The percentage of spending on both resources and furniture and equipment fluctuated. The figure for resources was highest in 1991 with 20%, whereas furniture and equipment peaked at 23% in 2001.
The pie charts compare the
changes
in the percentage of annual expenditure by a specific
school
in the UK in three
different
years.

Overall
, teachers' salaries took up the largest proportion of the
school’s
spending
in all three years; while insurance made up the smallest percentage.

In 1981;
spending
on teachers salaries accounted for 40% of the
schools’
budget. This figure rose
minimally
to 50% in 1991,
but
then dropped to 45% in 2001. The proportion of
spending
in other workers’ salaries decreased
steadily
over the 20-year-period; from 28% in 1981 to 15% in 2001.

2% of the
schools’
budget
was spent
on insurance in 1981.
However
, this figure rose fourfold to 8% in 2001. The percentage of
spending
on both resources and furniture and equipment fluctuated. The figure for resources was highest in 1991 with 20%, whereas furniture and equipment peaked at 23% in 2001.
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IELTS academic The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001

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