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The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.

The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world. jqxw

The three pie charts give information about water consumption for three different parts: residential, industry, agriculture in San Diego, California, and the rest of the globe. Overall, in both San Diego and California, the amount of water used for households makes up the highest proportion. By comparison, agriculture takes up the total amount of water used in the world. Water use for residential in San Diego and California accounts for 60% and 39% respectively. The amount of water for this global sector only stands at 8%. However; there are 69% global water uses in agriculture, while the figuges for San Diego and California only spend 23% and 33% respectively. As it can be seen in the provided pie charts, the industrial sectors in San Dìego and the world gain the same proportion at 23%, while in California the percentage of industrial water usage is slightly higher at 33%.

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