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The chart below shows the health spending among five different countries in 2002.

The chart below shows the health spending among five different countries in 2002. oxN3q
The given bar chart illustrates the health spending among five various nations in 2002. The X-axis represent countries such as: Japan, Italy, France, Germany and USA while the Y-axis shows percentages of health spending of GDP. Overall, it is apparent from the bar chart that Japan, Italy, France and Germany were spending the same levels of health are: the total spending, public spending and private spending in 2002 whereas USA spent different of other. To begin with, France and Germany pupiles were giving same time for their health like: total spending and public spending were approx 12 and 10 percentages of GDP in 2002 when only a two out of hundred of private spending at same step mearly. Furthermore, American spent their health GDP privately rather than public spending citizen of USA gave near about a fifteen in the private health care spending in 2002. However, the total spending reached the peack point of forteen began at USA in 2002.
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health
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spending
among five various nations in 2002. The X-axis represent countries such as: Japan, Italy, France, Germany and USA while the Y-axis
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shows
percentages of
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health
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spending
of GDP.

Overall
, it is apparent from the bar chart that Japan, Italy, France and Germany were
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spending
the same levels of
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health
are: the total
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spending
, public
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spending
and private
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spending
in 2002 whereas USA spent
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different
of other. To
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begin
with, France and Germany
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pupiles
were giving same time for their
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health
like: total
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spending
and public
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spending
were approx 12 and 10 percentages of GDP in 2002 when
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only
a two out of hundred of private
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spending
at same step
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mearly
.

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, American spent their
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health
GDP
privately
rather
than public
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spending
citizen
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of USA
gave near about a fifteen in the private
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health
care
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spending
in 2002.
However
, the total
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spending
reached the
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peack
point of
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forteen
began
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at USA
in 2002.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the health spending among five different countries in 2002.

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160 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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