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The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.

The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. g0qA

The given chart illustrates the amount of money spent on five goods by France and UK in 2010. As transparent from the chart, two nations spent most of money on cars in 2010, whereas the opposite was true for perfumes. Besides, the most significant difference between France and UK was seen in cameras. In 2010, there were over 450, 000 pounds in the spending of UK on cars, roughly 50, 000 pounds higher than that of France. In addition, books received 400, 000 pounds and 300, 000 pounds in the expenditure of France and UK respectively. The year 2010 witnessed 150, 000 pounds used for cameras in France, which was approximately as half of the figure for UK (350, 000 pounds). On the other hand, the amount of money consumed on computers in France were 375, 000 pounds as opposed to that in UK at 375, 000 pounds. Furthermore, perfumes was the least popular good, that accounted for just nearly 140, 000 pounds and 200, 000 pounds in UK and France.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 chart illustrates the amount of money spent on five This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 by France and UK in 2010.

As transparent from the chart, two nations spent Consider using "most money" or "most of the money".most moneymost of the money
most of money
 on cars in 2010, whereas the opposite was true for perfumes. Besides
, the most significant difference between France and UK was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in cameras.

In 2010, there were over 450, 000 pounds in the spending of UK on cars, roughly 50, 000 pounds higher than that of France. In addition
, books received 400, 000 pounds and 300, 000 pounds in the expenditure of France and UK respectively
. The year 2010 witnessed 150, 000 pounds This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for cameras in France, which was approximately as half of the figure for UK (350, 000 pounds).

On the other hand
, the amount of money consumed on computers in France were 375, 000 pounds as opposed to that in UK at 375, 000 pounds. Furthermore
, perfumes was the least popular This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
, that accounted for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
nearly
 140, 000 pounds and 200, 000 pounds in UK and France. 