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The line graph below shows the consumption of 4 kinds of meat in an European country from 1979 to 2004

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The line graph compares the intake of chicken, beef, lamb and fishin an European country within a period of six years(1979, 1984, 1989, 1994, 2004) Overall, the most popular meat consumed per person in a week at the end of the period was chicken. Fish was the least consumed food over the period. In 1979, the total amount of chicken consumed by each individual in a week was 150grams, which increased over the period and peaked at about 250grams in 2004. Fish intake started at just 52grams in 1979 and reduced by 2grams in 1984 which remained fairly stable over the rest of the period. In terms of beef and lamb, both started at 220grams and 150grams respectively in the first year and recorded a dramatic decrease trend over the rest of the period. Beef consumption reduced about 40grams in the middle of the first year and rose steedily over the next two years(1984 and 1989) but declined dramatically to 110grams at the end of the period while lamb consumption also dropped to a low of 60grams at the end of the given period.
The line graph compares the intake of chicken, beef, lamb and
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European country within a
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of six years(1979, 1984, 1989, 1994, 2004)

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was chicken. Fish was the least consumed food
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the period.

In 1979, the total amount of chicken consumed by each individual in a week was
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150grams
, which increased
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the
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and peaked at about
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250grams
in 2004. Fish intake
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52grams
in 1979 and
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in 1984 which remained
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the rest of the period.

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and recorded a dramatic decrease trend
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the rest of the
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. Beef consumption
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while lamb consumption
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