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The chart andgraph below give information about participants who have enteredthe Olympics since it began.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features,and make comparisons where relevant

The chart andgraph below give information about participants who have enteredthe Olympics since it began. ppeD
The bar chart illustrates the quantity of male and female competitors in the Olympics while the line graph demonstrates the total number of the Olympians from the Olympic game’s beginning in 1924 to 2012. First, looking at the chart, it is easily apparent that number of female participants increased rapidly in 88 years period, from a tiny amount to nearly 5, 000 women. Besides the dramatic growth of female Olympians, the number of man competitors firstly began with quite high amount but this number just rose slightly in the period from 1924 to 2012. About the line graph, it can be seen that the number of competitors grew gradually from 1924 to 1984 and from this year, the value is almost doubled from over 6, 000 to more than 10, 000 people. To summarize, the bar chart shows that although the increase in the number of men is not as fast as the one of women, it still occupies more the total number of participants. However, different from the past, the gap in quantity between female and male was gradually becoming more narrow.
The bar chart illustrates the quantity of male and
female
competitors in the Olympics while the line graph demonstrates the total
number
of the Olympians from the Olympic game’s beginning in 1924 to 2012.

First
, looking at the chart, it is
easily
apparent that
number
of
female
participants increased
rapidly
in 88 years period, from a tiny amount to
nearly
5, 000 women.
Besides
the dramatic growth of
female
Olympians, the
number
of
man
competitors
firstly
began with quite high amount
but
this
number
just
rose
slightly
in the period from 1924 to 2012.

About the line graph, it can be
seen
that the
number
of competitors grew
gradually
from 1924 to 1984 and from this year, the value is almost doubled from over 6, 000 to more than 10, 000
people
.

To summarize
, the bar chart
shows
that although the increase in the
number
of
men
is not as
fast
as the one of women, it
still
occupies more the total
number
of participants.
However
,
different
from the past, the gap in quantity between
female
and male was
gradually
becoming more narrow.
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