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he diagram shows how a type of tent called a tepee is built. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates how a kind of tent called tepee is put up. Overall, there are eight stages in the whole tent setting up process, beginning with an action of binding three sticks by a rope and ending with the canvas be fastened to a stake. After finishing the first step, those sticks will be pulled up, they will constitute a tripod. Then, more sticks will be appended to the tripod to make it become solid. Next, all those sticks are tied again to make sure that they are fixed. The next stage is covering a stick with a canvas then fasten this stick to the frame which was already made. In the sixth stage, the canvas is unfolded and it will wrap around those sticks. Then, to attach the canvas, metal pins will be used. Finishing the seventh step, the tepee's bottom will be fastened to the stake by a rope.
The diagram illustrates how a kind of tent called tepee
is put
up.

Overall
, there are eight stages in the whole tent setting up process, beginning with an action of binding three
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sticks
by a rope and ending with the
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canvas
be fastened
to a stake.

After finishing the
first
step, those
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sticks
will
be pulled
up, they will constitute a tripod. Then, more
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sticks
will
be appended
to the tripod to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it become solid.
Next
, all those
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sticks
are tied
again to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that they are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fixed
. The
next
stage is covering a
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stick
with a
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canvas
then fasten this
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stick
to the frame which was already made. In the sixth stage, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
canvas
is unfolded
and it will wrap around those
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sticks
. Then, to attach the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
canvas
, metal pins will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
. Finishing the seventh step, the tepee's bottom will
be fastened
to the stake by a rope.

IELTS academic he diagram shows how a type of tent called a tepee is built.

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