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The chart below shows the eating habit in England, Sweden and Korea in 2010

The chart below shows the eating habit in England, Sweden and Korea in 2010 6KgWr
The bar chart provides a comparison of food choices in three different countries in 2010. Overall, it is clear that fresh food accounted for the highest proportion in Korea, while frozen food was the most popular choice in England and Sweden. Moreover, pre-cooked meals were the only type of food that attracted more than 20% of people to eat in all three nations. Over half of the amount of food consumed in Korea was fresh food, which was nearly double the corresponding figure of Sweden. Meanwhile, a tiny minority (8%) of people in England ate fresh food. By contrast, frozen food and eat out dominated in England and Sweden. Regarding frozen food, the highest percentage belonged to England (35%), which was followed by Sweden (28%) and Korea (10%) respectively. Turning to eating out, one fourth of people chose this type in England and Sweden, while this rate was just 15% in Korea. In terms of pre-cooked meals, the pattern was different. This type of food had the second ranking of food consumption in both England and Korea. It contributed to the lowest amount in Sweden, with 22% only.
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choices in three
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countries in 2010.

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that fresh
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accounted for the highest proportion in Korea, while frozen
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was the most popular choice in England and Sweden.
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meals were the
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type of
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that attracted more than 20% of
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people
to eat in all three nations.

Over half of the amount of
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consumed in Korea was fresh
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, which was
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double the corresponding figure of Sweden. Meanwhile, a tiny minority (8%) of
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people
in England ate fresh
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food
. By contrast, frozen
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and eat out dominated in England and Sweden. Regarding frozen
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, the highest percentage belonged to England (35%), which
was followed
by Sweden (28%) and Korea (10%)
respectively
. Turning to eating out, one fourth of
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people
chose this type in England and Sweden, while this rate was
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just
15% in Korea.

In terms of
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meals, the pattern was
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. This type of
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had the second ranking of
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consumption in both England and Korea. It contributed to the lowest amount in Sweden, with 22%
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