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The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart compares the men and women who have has enrolled in the five different types of post-school qualifications in Australia in the year 1999. The data is calibrated in percentage. Overall, the proportion of men's enrolled in the Skilled Vocational Diploma was the highest if compared to any other programme, whereas undergraduate diploma and bachelor's degree were the only qualifications, which had the highest percentage of female students. To begin with, 90% of the male students were enrolled in the skilled vocational programme, which was the largest, whereas only 10% of female students were doing this programme. On the other hand, womens studying in the postgraduate diploma were only 30% but the percentage of men studying in this programme were 40% higher than the females. While the proportions of men and women enrolled in master's degree were 60% and 40% respectively. In case of undergraduate diploma, there were almost 35% more female students than the male. There was a modest difference of just 5% between the male and female students enrolled in the bachelor's degree where the percentage of mens were around 45% and womens were 50%.
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types of post-school qualifications in Australia in the year 1999. The data
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percentage
.
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, the proportion of
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men
's enrolled in the Skilled Vocational
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Diploma
was the highest if compared to any other
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programme
, whereas undergraduate
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diploma
and bachelor's degree were the
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only
qualifications, which had the highest
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female
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students
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with, 90% of the male
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students
were enrolled
in the skilled vocational
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programme
, which was the largest, whereas
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10% of
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female
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students
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programme
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studying in the postgraduate
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30%
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studying in this
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programme
were 40% higher than the
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females
. While the proportions of
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men
and
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enrolled in master's degree were 60% and 40%
respectively
. In case of undergraduate
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diploma
, there were almost 35% more
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female
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students
than the male. There was a modest difference of
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just
5% between the male and
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enrolled in the bachelor's degree where the
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mens
were around 45% and
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were 50%.

IELTS academic The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.

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