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The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019. QLwoP
TThis bar chart illustrates the changing rates of crime in burglary, car theft and robbery of crime in Panama City between 2010 to 2019. Overall, burglary is the highest number of incidents while robbery is the least number of incidents. According to what is shown, in 2010 the number of burglary has the highest number of incidents which is 3400 incidents while the number of robbery has almost 700 incidents which is the lowest rate. In 2015 burglary had decreased sharply which is 1000 incidents, but robbery had fallen gradually which is 500 incidents. Then both burglary and robbery started to increase modestly until 2016. In 2019 robbery was the lowest rate in the end of the period. In early 2010 the number of car thefts was around 2800 incidents. however, it declined to 2100 incidents in 2013. Then there was a modest increase in incidents in 2019, but car thefts were the highest rate in the end of the period.
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bar chart illustrates the changing
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rates
of crime in
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burglary
, car theft and
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robbery
of crime in Panama City
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between 2010 to 2019
.

Overall
,
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burglary
is the highest
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number
of
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incidents
while
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robbery
is the least
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number
of incidents.

According to what
is shown
, in 2010 the
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number
of
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burglary
has the highest
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number
of
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incidents
which is 3400
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incidents
while the
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number
of
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robbery
has almost 700
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incidents
which is the lowest
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rate
. In 2015
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burglary
had decreased
sharply
which is 1000
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incidents
,
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but
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robbery
had fallen
gradually
which is 500
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incidents
. Then both
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burglary
and
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robbery
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started
to increase
modestly
until 2016. In 2019
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robbery
was the lowest
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rate
in the
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end
of the period.

In early 2010 the
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number
of car thefts was around 2800
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incidents
.
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however
, it declined to 2100
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incidents
in 2013. Then there was a modest increase in
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incidents
in 2019,
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but
car thefts were the highest
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rate
in the
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end
of the period.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019.

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