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The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019. 0AMdq
The chart here illustrates the changes of crime that happened in three different ways ( burglary, car theft, robbery) in Panama City for 9 years ( from 2010 to 2019). Overall, the robbery was still high steady during those all years while burglary and car theft went through sharp changes from the beginning to the end. burglary was the most common way of crime in Panama started with around 3500 cases; then, in 2011 it reached a peak of about 3800 incidents; since then, it had quickly dropped till 2015 scored a low point of 1000. After that, it staged a partial recovery and completed steadily from 2016 to 2019 reaching about 1500 events. In contrast, the car theft cases began lower than burglary started in a stable position with around 3000 to 2012, but then, there was a sharp decline to 2000 incidents. Then from 2013, there was a slight increase of almost -------- until it exceeded the burglary by to the end of 2019 and got back to the same number which was amount about 2800. In contrast, In robbery there were are not many changes in robberies; it was stable over the years. Its It is the lowest rate in 2010 was around 500 and went through little variations, but, in 2019 stabilized at came back to the same range of its beginning.
The chart here illustrates the
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in Panama City for 9 years
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from 2010 to 2019).

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, the
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high steady during those all years while
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and car theft went through sharp
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from the beginning to the
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burglary
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with around 3500 cases; then, in 2011 it reached a peak of about 3800 incidents; since then, it had
quickly
dropped till 2015 scored a low point of 1000. After that, it staged a partial recovery and completed
steadily
from 2016 to 2019 reaching about 1500
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.
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, the car theft cases began lower than
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burglary
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in a stable position with around 3000 to 2012,
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then, there was a sharp decline to 2000 incidents. Then from 2013, there was a slight increase of almost -------- until it exceeded the
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burglary
by to the
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of 2019 and
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back to the same number which was amount about 2800.

In contrast
, In
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there were are not
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in
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; it was stable over the years. Its It is the lowest rate in 2010 was around 500 and went through
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little
variations,
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, in 2019 stabilized at came back to the same range of its beginning.

IELTS academic The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019.

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