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The maps below show the changes that took place at the seaside resort of Tempelton between 2000 and 2013. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The maps below show the changes that took place at the seaside resort of Tempelton between 2000 and 2013. ljdA9
The two maps indicate how the seaside resort of Templeton changed for a thirteen-year period. In 2013 the resort was considerably larger and more urbanized than it was in 2000. To begin with, in 2000 the seaside resort had many more plants and trees but during the year a significant part of them had been demolished. In the west, several houses were removed and a new road was build right next to the river. Also, a new supermarket was constructed as well as few blocks of flats across the street. By 2013, an airport just south-west of the school had been built. In addition, in the south-east, a lot of trees had been cut down and the forest had been replaced with a factory. A ferry was also added on in the south-east of Templeton. The railway path had been extended from the east to the west, crossing the river at the junction with the sea coastline. Overall, the urban area was greatly expanded between 2000 and 2013.
The two maps indicate how the seaside resort of Templeton
changed
for a thirteen-year period. In 2013 the resort was
considerably
larger and more urbanized than it was in 2000.

To
begin
with, in 2000 the seaside resort had
many
more plants and trees
but
during the year a significant part of them had
been demolished
. In the west, several
houses
were removed
and a new road was build right
next
to the river.
Also
, a new supermarket
was constructed
as well
as few blocks of flats across the street. By 2013, an airport
just
south-west of the school had
been built
.
In addition
, in the south-east,
a lot of
trees had been
cut
down and the forest had
been replaced
with a factory. A ferry was
also
added
on in the south-east of Templeton. The railway path had
been extended
from the east to the west, crossing the river at the junction with the sea coastline.

Overall
, the urban area was
greatly
expanded between 2000 and 2013.
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IELTS academic The maps below show the changes that took place at the seaside resort of Tempelton between 2000 and 2013.

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