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Compare the town of bridell And local areas in 1800,1900 and 2000

Compare the town of bridell And local areas in 1800, 1900 and 2000 NXK2
The rendered maps depict the information regarding the changes occurred in Brindell as well as local areas from given three years time period. Overall, it is lucid that from 1800 to 2000 plethora of changes were took-place in Brindell and in local areas. At a fleeting glance, it is crystal clear that in 1800 the farmland was placed in northwest in next two year's its size declined. Moreover, northeast side the woodland was situated, while in 1900 an 2000 its size decreased band and also in last year it's some part consume for bunhill park. Nextly, in southwest the Brindell was located and in the end of the year its size inclined. Following this, the southeast side utilizes by farmland but in 1900 it was replaced by bun hill and industry. Lastly, the size of industry as well as bun hill climbed up.
The rendered maps depict the information regarding the
changes
occurred in
Brindell
as well
as local areas from
given
three years time period.

Overall
, it is lucid that from 1800 to 2000 plethora of
changes
were took-place in
Brindell
and in local areas.

At a fleeting glance, it is crystal
clear
that in 1800 the farmland
was placed
in northwest in
next
two
year's
its
size
declined.
Moreover
, northeast side the woodland
was situated
, while in 1900 an 2000 its
size
decreased band and
also
in last year it's
some
part
consume for
bunhill
park.
Nextly
, in southwest the
Brindell
was located
and in the
end
of the year its
size
inclined.

Following this, the southeast side utilizes by farmland
but
in 1900 it
was replaced
by bun hill and industry.
Lastly
, the
size
of industry
as well
as bun hill climbed up.
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IELTS academic Compare the town of bridell And local areas in 1800, 1900 and 2000

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