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the chart below shows the average hours worked per day by married men and women in paid employment.

the chart below shows the average hours worked per day by married men and women in paid employment. R5mbQ
The normal working hours spent each day by couples are indicated in this bar chart. Both paid and unpaid jobs being done at home are mentioned. OverallyTit is understood that married women at any age tend to spend more time on their careers (no matter with or without a salary) than men. Although paid occupations are absolutely well-liked among folks, wives are more into unpaid working than their spouses. Based on the given data, young men work more than their middle-aged mates. To be more detailed, married couples between the ages of 24-44, work more than they would at the age of 45 to 64, with an average amount of 10 hours each day. Wives work twice as men in unpaid teleworking jobs. This proportion, however, remains the same when they get older. Seemingly, both people in a couple work the same as each other while they are in their 40's and 50's, with paid jobs staying everyone's top favourite among other kinds, as 8 hours of people's daily life is spent on that, in order to make a living for their shared lives.
The normal working hours spent each day by couples
are indicated
in this bar chart. Both paid and unpaid jobs
being done
at home
are mentioned
.
OverallyTit
is understood
that married women at any age tend to spend more time on their careers (no matter with or without a salary) than
men
. Although paid occupations are
absolutely
well-liked among folks, wives are more into unpaid working than their spouses. Based on the
given
data, young
men
work
more than their middle-aged mates. To be more detailed, married couples between the ages of 24-44,
work
more than they would at the age of 45 to 64, with an average amount of 10 hours each day. Wives
work
twice as
men
in unpaid teleworking jobs. This proportion,
however
, remains the same when they
get
older.
Seemingly
, both
people
in a couple
work
the same as each other while they are in their
40's
and
50's
, with paid jobs staying everyone's top
favourite
among other kinds, as 8 hours of
people
's daily life
is spent
on that, in order to
make
a living for their shared
lives
.
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