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The chart below shows the amount of refugees who came to Canada in 2005-2010.

The chart below shows the amount of refugees who came to Canada in 2005-2010. pe5y0
The bar chart illustrates the amount of refugees who came to Canada due to the various reasons such as Dependants Abroad, Protected Persons in Canada, Privately Sponsored Refugees, Government Assisted Refugees over that period between 2005 and 2010. Overall, the most amount of refugees in total was in 2005, while the least amount of refugees in sum was in 2008. It is obvious that there was decreasing steadily from 2005 to 2008. Meanwhile, after 2008 there was decreasing gradually until 2010. It is clear that the most changeable figure was amount of Protected Persons in Canada. There was a number of decrease and slight increase. On the other hand, in the other figures had no significant difference by years. The differences generally were slight. For instance, in 2005 the amount of Government Assisted Refugees were nearly 7000, and then in 2010 there was no noticeable increase. It was still approximately 7000 during this period. Likewise, the red one, so Privately Sponsored Refugees had similar trend with blue one.
The bar chart illustrates the
amount
of
refugees
who came to Canada due to the various reasons such as
Dependants
Abroad, Protected Persons in Canada,
Privately
Sponsored
Refugees
,
Government
Assisted
Refugees
over that period between 2005 and 2010.

Overall
, the most
amount
of
refugees
in total was in 2005, while the least
amount
of
refugees
in sum was in 2008. It is obvious that there was decreasing
steadily
from 2005 to 2008. Meanwhile, after 2008 there was decreasing
gradually
until 2010.

It is
clear
that the most changeable figure was
amount
of Protected Persons in Canada. There was a number of decrease and slight increase.
On the other hand
, in the other figures had no significant difference by years. The differences
generally
were slight.
For instance
, in 2005 the
amount
of
Government
Assisted
Refugees
were
nearly
7000, and then in 2010 there was no noticeable increase. It was
still
approximately 7000 during this period.
Likewise
, the red one,
so
Privately
Sponsored
Refugees
had similar trend with blue one.
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