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The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.

The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. pR1ww
the given bar chart illustration the amount of incomes per week on fast food in britain. and second line graph elaborated how consumption of fast foods in 1970 to 1990. it can be seen from the bar chart that three type of income groups such as high income, avarage income and low income. And three type of fast food like hamburgers, fish and chips, and pizza. In 1970 hamburges was arround 100 grammes consumption, which was reached arround 500 grammes till 1990. high incomes people was highest expendituare in hamburges. which was abouve 40. and least expendituare on fish and chips, which was 17. while avarage and low income was spending money totally different. In 1970 fish and chips was highest proportion on consumption of fast foods. which was decreased till 1965 and after that again increased in 1990. overall pizza was lowest proportion consumption of fast food in 1970 and hamburges was highest propostion consumption in 1990
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food
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britain
.
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second line graph elaborated how
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consumption
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foods
in 1970 to 1990.

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seen
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groups such as high
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income
,
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avarage
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income
and low
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income
. And three type of
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fast
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food
like hamburgers, fish and chips, and pizza. In 1970
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hamburges
was
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100
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grammes
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, which
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arround
500
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grammes
till 1990.
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high
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was highest
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hamburges
.
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40.
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on fish and chips, which was 17.
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was spending money
totally
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. In 1970 fish and chips was
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.
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which
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overall
pizza was
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food
in 1970 and
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was highest
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propostion
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in 1990
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.

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